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©2008-2009 ~BennyIII
:iconbennyiii:

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its for *manany 's "game" And the reference picture is here: [link]

I just did the sketch and some shadowing. But i feel like there is something wrong. Really. but what ? please, some help.

move this to scrap later.
edit : in scrap.

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:iconaurynbb:
idk i think it is really good. :)

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-A♥RYN
:iconmanany:
Déjà très joli ^^

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:iconaurynbb:
u r welcome. i am so amazed by ur work.

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-A♥RYN
:icondimaa:
it's really nice~ i like it! :heart:
okay, i think what makes it look strange is that the black circles in her pupils are in different positions, so i think if you could fix the right one, it would look much better!
it looks really good! and nice shading! :clap:

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"Even if you despise yourself, the pain will not vanish
Embrace the eternal sadness"

-Gackt
:iconbennyiii:
thanks dimaa !

hum, you think the right eye (her left eye) is not in the same direction as the other one? Is that all ? I always find it hard to get the eyes alike ...
thanks for the help :hug:
:icondimaa:
welcome! :heart:
umm yeah, not the pupil, but the dark circle in the middle,
hehe yeah i find eyes hard too ><;

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"Even if you despise yourself, the pain will not vanish
Embrace the eternal sadness"

-Gackt
:iconhedspace77:
I feel like an idiot for not noticing earlier that you'd join the game
*:shakefist: at myself*
I'm looking in your gallery, and recognised Ziyi immediately. I can't see anything glaringly wrong in the drawing.
:D

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August 26, 2008
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Panasonic
DMC-LC20
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F/2.8
5 mm
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Aug 25, 2008, 8:23:33 PM

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